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The two old Ponies are relaxing in a bar....

Scruffy= Something to drink to get never out of the way...
Braveheart= ah.... ah Damn!
Scruffy= Is something wrong Braveheart.
Braveheart= This Fillies... This Mare... AAAAGH.. Not fair.
Scruffy= Let me guess, you Can't' chose which one you like.
Braveheart= That's not problem I can get them all, The thing is they are Fillyfouls
Scruffy= Fillyfouls?
Braveheart= A mare that likes mares.
Scruffy=.....
Braveheart= is not fair they are all beautiful and whats the deal with the pink ribbon on there necks.
Scruffy= hurry up help me finish the pitcher so we can go search the next Recruit.
Braveheart= Yeah okay, So who is the new recruit
Scruffy= a Shapeshi-

A colt just ran in the bar crying for help.

Young Colt= HELP! HELP! My Marefriend was catcher by the witch !!

Everypony in the bar= Didn't we all told you not go through the lover's path.
Young Colt= Please someone help!
Braveheart= I'll help.
Young Colt= Thank you Sir!
Braveheart= Just show me the Lover's path.
Young Colt= Okay follow me.

The two old ponies follow the young Colt to the forest.

Young Colt= We are here.
Scruffy= Why is call lover's path?
Young Colt= When a couple pass the Lover's path to the other side of the forest they are destined to be in love forever.
Braveheart= Lame...
Scruffy= Hush braveheart! Sorry about my friend here he have bad relationship.
Braveheart= Well let's go find your Marefriend.
Young Colt= I'm not going to witch will eat me.....
Scruffy= Stay her will look for her.
Young Colt= Thank sirs.

Scruffy and Braveheart when deeper in the forest...

Braveheart= Lover's Path. whomade this story?
Scruffy= I don't see or hear nobody.
Braveheart= Look Likes the Witch have ate the pony, HA HA HA HA. I think is just bear that scared them away. I bet the young ponies invented the Lover's path and the parents invented the witch to keep young couples falling in love.
Scruffy= You told him that will find her.
Braveheart= I bet she is hiding or she ran through other side of the path- Sniff Sniff Sniff.
Scruffy= What to you smell?
Braveheart= The smell of an excited filly?
Scruffy= You can smell that?
Braveheart= Yeah that's how i go for kill when the mares are well you know.
Scruffy= where is the smell coming?
Braveheart= We are getting close sniff sniff Right here.

Braveheart and Scruffy look behind the tree, there was the filly laying behind the tree, her eyes where close and tears dripping, Her face is blushing and theres a pink ribbon around her next.
Scruffy= Are you okay?
Young Mare= Huh? sniff I need to go.

The young mare got up and ran away.

Scuffy= Not even a thank you. I wonder what happen to her?
Braveheart= She was violated.
Scruffy= Why you said that- Oh sh!t a bear!

A large bear appear front of the two ponies. The bear is roaring at them.

Braveheart= so are you going to attack us or you just going to keep roaring?
Scruffy= You are not a bear.

The bear is still roaring untill the bear magical transform to a little small female dragon.

Little female dragon= roar roar roar meow i mean roar.....ooops... he he he
Braveheart= so you are the witch that is scaring the couples in the forest?
A Talking tree= No she is not is me

The tree transforms to a mare unicorn the same tree that the The young colt Marefriend was laying next to it. The mare has green hair, white coat and wearing ribbon everywhere. This mare is very Beautiful.

Scruffy=......
Braveheart=.......

Scuffy is staring at Braveheart.

Braveheart= What? why are you looking me like that?
Scruff= You don't see her that she is beautiful are you not going to use your charms on her?
Braveheart= Oh not this one, With all my power of seduction i will never sweep her from her hooves.
Unicorn mare= so you Got me. let's go Soul.
Scruff= Hold on there. Is that your dragon?
Unicorn mare= Yes she is my dragon.
Braveheart= so that mean that you attend the Celestia's School for Gifted Unicorns only a few unicorn attend that academy.
Scruffy= So that means that your name is Shifterdreams
Shifterdreams= Yeah that's me. You are not here for the young mare?
Scruffy= We are but we didn't expect that your the witch. Why are you scaring the couples? And what did you did to that young mare just know.
Shifterdreams= Just having fun.
Braveheart= So you don't eat ponies.
Shifterdreams= oh I do I just prefer mares if you get my drift.
Scruffy= Huh? but why.
Shifterdreams= I started all this the lover's path and the Witch. I want to show every couples that sometimes the Pony you like is not the one for you. When a couple go through the lovers Path I transform Soul to a monster to scared the couples, if the Colt stays and protects his Marefriend, they are made for each others, the colt loves his marefriend, so Souls leaves them alone. But if the colt runs away from the monster and leaves her marefriend, there are not made for each others. But the sad thing the Mare pony is crying so I comfort her, make her feel special, make her smile he he he.
Braveheart= I see why the smell of excited filly came from. But why the ribbon on her neck?
Shifterdreams= To remind them what just happen, to remind them of me and to remind them that a colt is not the only pony to make them feel good he he he.
Scruffy= I'm impress of your transformation spells, even though I still think you are using them for the wrong reasons.
Braveheart= Shifterdreams we came her to ask for your help.
Shifterdreams= What do you need my help.
Scruffy= we want you to join the Destriers.
Shifterdreams= Destriers?
Braveheart= They are Princess Celestia's Knights. We where order to recruit new members to help us rescue the Daughters of Harmony.
Shifterdreams= Daughters of Harmony?
Scruffy= They where ponynap and they are special to Princess Celestia heres a Picture of them.
Shifterdreams= Pinkie! Pinkie Pinkie Pinkie Pinkie Pinkie Pinkie Pinkie Pinkie Pinkie Pinkie Pinkie Pinkie Pinkie You found her YEAH!!!
Shifterdreams= She was my first crush and my first kiss. I was looking for her all this years, I never found her...... now she is ponynap........Soul we must to rescue her!
Soul= I can't believe she was ponynap. But yeah we must have to rescue her.
Braveheart= How long you knew her?

(Flashback starts here)
Shifterdreams= At school. when I was a young mare every colt made fun of me because i have two mothers..... They bully me a lot. There was one pony trying to make everypony smile and happy an that was Pinkie Pie. She was trying to make everyone smile at school but she couldn't make me smile because I'm always being bully at except her she is so fun to be with. She told me that is her mission to make me smile, she try everything making parties, playing games, singing to me, making cookies for me, and she is the only pony that stay at my first sleepover. One day when we walk to this path before it was call Lover's path. She was talking a lot like usual but then a huge bear appear front of us. Pinkie stand front of me facing the bear. I told her to run but she told me to run. She was saying to the bear, Please mister bear go away, But the Bear was Hungry I didn't move I was afraid of losing Pinkie Pie if she stay. I told her told to run with me while I was crying but in that moment something strange happen.

Shifterdream= Please Pinkie let's run.
Pinkie Pie= Please mister Bear stay away from my friend.
Bear= ROAR!!!
Shifterdream= Pinkie no!! sniff sniff......Huh?

For some reason I felt sad like the sun will never come up. When I look at pinkie her mane was not puffy it was straight. The bear stop roaring it felt that the bear was now freighting of Pinkie so the bear ran away from us, I was scared too. Then pinkie turn to look at me her eyes where not Pinkies......

Pinkamena Diane Pie= aRe YoU oKaY?
Shifterdream= a-a-ah yeah....
Pinkamena Diane Pie= DoN't bE aFrAiD Of mE!
Shifterdream= A-a-are you okay?

Then Pinkie was getting close to me very close.....
Shifterdream= W-why are y-you getting close to me-
Pinkamena Diane Pie= shh...

Her face was close to my face....
Shifterdream= P-pinkie I don't L-like this
Pinkamena Diane Pie=shh... tHiS WoN't HuRt.

In that moment Pinkie kiss me on my lips I felt scared but I like it, then she push me behind a tree and we spent the night together.... She made me feel good. When morning came I woke up while pinkie was Cuddling me. Her mane is Puffy again.

Pinkie Pie= Morning Shift!
Shifterdream= Morning Pinkie.
Pinkie Pie= Hey You are Smilling! Mission accomplished.
How did I make you smile?
Shifterdream= You don't Remember?
Pinkie Pie= YES I DO wait no I don't Remember. Oh Horseapples. How can I make you smile you again?
Shifterdream= Like this....

I kiss Pinkie Pie on her Lips like she kiss me but this time it made me happy.

Pinkie Pie= mmmm Cupcakes.

(Flashback end here).

Shifterdream= I must rescue her!
Soul= Sniff.... we must rescue Pinkie.
Braveheart= And we will rescue her and her Friends.
Scruffy= Now is time to find the leader of the New Destriers.

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:iconshifterdreams:
wow the story you made up suites her really well you even got her personality right and i love how pinkie saved her and the cutie mark you made was really awesome if im allowed can i but it on my pixel reff sheet for her please ^^
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Mood: Joy *Rayodragon May 26, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm so glad that you like it and yes you can.
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thank you ^^
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I like how pinkie protected Shifterdreams and that's now how she determines if a colt is the one for a mare. That whole thing really ties in well.
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*The-Land-Shark May 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, THAT'S interesting. I thought the Destriers would be all-male, but obviously not.
Oh well... ONE MORE TO GOOOOOO! 8D
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:iconcommisar-erdno:
i dident see that coming from Pinkie Pie even on this story
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:icontwilitmoon:
For a second, I though the whole team was gonna be male, so I'm gad to see a female member of the team. Also, I'm unsure whether it is just coincidence or herd-mind, but I had an idea for a female OC who had an appearance JUST like this :D
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~King-of-Darkness50 May 24, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Wow, interesting story. I like it :)
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~CirrusCloud9 May 24, 2011   General Artist
:w00t: A bit of twist to see how Pinkie is rescued
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