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Pwease be my knight.

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This story is before 1000 years.

Two unicorn ponies are walking to Canterlot  castle.

little Colt Foal= sis sis I can't wait to grow up and be like you.
Mare= You will be my little brother. Now remember that you will behaved yourself with the princesses, okay.
little Colt Foal= I promise sis.
Pony Guards at the castle door= Good evening Maxine Destrier.
Maxine= good evening shield and iron.
Iron= Who is the little foal.
Maxine= his my Little Brother he is going to play with the princess.
Shield= But is almost night time, is Celestial bed time and she has a lot friends that came over to play with her already.
Maxine= Oh No he is going to play with Luna at night.
Iron/Shield=???? he is not going to sleep at night. Are little Luna gets sad when a Little foal sleep at night.
Maxine= Oh don't worry he won't

Maxine and her brother went to the princess chambers. when the got to the door the door open and more then ten little foal came rushing out the princess room. Each one was leaving and saying goodnight to Princess Celestial.

the foals that are leaving= good night tia, you are awesome, good night princess, it was fun, oh pony is night time need to get to bed or mommy will get mad, thank your highness, bye princess see you at the morning.

All the little Foal came running out from the castle. There was A teen white dragon beaten on the floor from the little foals Stampeded.

Maxine= are you okay Arty?
Arty= ouch those friends of Celestial are a hand full. They don't stop jumping and yelling all day. I'm happy that you came I need a break...... Oh is that your Little brother? Hi My name is Arty.

The little brother of Maxine was scared of Arty that he run behind her big sister.

Maxine= don't be afraid of him he won't bite ponies. Unless you are me(Maxine blushes).
Arty=he he he yeah(Arty Blushes).
Maxine= How's Celestial Arty?
Arty= A pain in the butt like Always.
Maxine= And Little Luna?
Arty= Always in her room after she raises the night. She always sad in her room.... sometimes she is crying. I hope your little brother can stay all night to play with Luna.
Maxine= Oh he will.


Maxine and his little brother went to the Princess Chamber. Princess Celestial was jumping on her bed.

Little Princess Celestial= Hello Maxine! how are you! Lets play a game!
Maxine= no no Princess is bed time is time to go to sleep.
Little Princess Celestial= I was thinking that I could stay awake tonight and play with my little sister pleasesssssssssssssss.
Maxine= no no you know you can't you need to sleep early to wake up in the morning to raise the sun for the all ponies.
Little Princess Celestial= Oh horseapple...
Maxine= Have you brush your teeth?
Little Princess Celestial= Yeah.
Maxine= Okay open your mouth let me smell you breath..... Okay. Have you taken a bath?
Little Princess Celestial= um... yes.
Maxine= Let me smell your hair.....ewww you stink how long you haven taken a bath?
Little Princess Celestial= Two... three .... no wait four days.
Maxine= no no no that is not how a princess should act take those PJs off and straight to the tub missy.
Little Princess Celestial= Oh... was about to beat Stinky record......
Maxine= Your friends are a bad influence to you. Now march to the bath tub missy.
Little Princess Celestial= Don't make me banish you!
Maxine= yeah yeah banish me after I took you a bath.

Princess Celestial when to the bathroom while Maxine follow her behind.
Maxine= Little brother can you wake up Luna for me she needs to raise the night. I need to take Princess Celestial a Bath......again.
Maxine Little Brother= Okay big sister.

Maxine little brother when to the other room cross the hall where Celestial room is, He open the door and see many small little stars hanging on  the ceiling like there is no roof. It was little small bright night lites on the ceiling. He see Princess Luna on her bed hugging a Plushie that look likes his big sister Maxine. Maxine Brother when to her bed and kiss luna on her cheek to wake her up.
Little Princess Luna= AAAAAHHH(Big Yawn) Is it Night time Maxine? Huh?
You awe not Maxine. Who awe you?
Maxine Little Brother= Maxine is my sister she brought me here to play with you.
Luna= weally!(luna sound so happy).... Oh wait you awe not going to sleep when we awe playing?
Maxine Little Brother= No I won't I stay awake all night and sleep all day so I can play with you.
Little Princess Luna= yeah! can't wait to play can we play that you awe my knight....oh wait But fiwst I need to kiss my Big sistew goodnight and waise the moon, okay.
Maxine Little brother= Okay.
Little Princess Luna= what's youw name?
Maxine Little Brother= My name is Rayo.
Little Princess Luna= Nice to meet you Wayo.

Luna and Rayo went to Celestial chambers, Celestial is on her bed now ready to sleep.
Little Princess Luna= Goodnight Big sistew. (she kiss Celestial on her cheek)
Little Princess Celestial= Goodnight Luna.... Why so happy tonight?
Little Princess Luna= Look I have fwiend like you he is going to play with me his name Wayo.

Princess Celestial looks at Rayo with disapprove look at him.

Little Princess Celestial= That's nice Luna.
Little Princess Luna= Yeah I can't wait! (Luna leaves Princess Celestial Chamber while jumping with joy).
Little Princess Celestial= Rayo.
Rayo= Yes your highness.
Little Princess Celestial= If you hurt my little sister I'll banish you.
Luna= come Wayo and see me waise the moon and then we play. You going to be my Knight and I'll be youw Pwincess.



Princess Celestial doesn't like Rayo for taken away her little sister Luna away from her.





If you eyes are bleeding for reading this. I'm very sorry, please don't corrected me. I know that I suck.
If you eyes bleed for reading I'm very sorry, Please don't be a Nazi at me.

Writer The-Land-Shark [link] (Some parts, when you read something that has bad Grammar The-Land-Shark didn't wrote that it was Rayodragon he is the reason why your eyes are bleeding)

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Oh Brother, how I miss you and love you. I'm so grateful to have this page to scroll through. Reading your stories sure do bring to life the image and memory I have of you. These complete embody your soul and take me back to all those nights at our dinning room table doing my homework while you paced back and forth and told me your stories. I remember Arty's story like no other, it's a shame no one else will get to hear it like I did. The way you talked made it possible for me to get lost and captivated in the imagination you shared. I would sit there in tears some times at that table, I would laugh and ask a million questions when you said "well I'm tired now, till next time" and I sit there in awe like "are you serious!" RIP Mundo thank you for always being you and staying true to yourself. The greatest quality about you is everything about you. You always shared your happiness and would do anything to make someone happy, you didn't change for acceptance, you didn't let society manipulate and decide who you were going to be or stop being like.